Aliah's Gift* (Original Poetry)

For Aliah Mae Arquiza by Edward Allen G. Daos (08/20/10)



I know that writing this may seem like I'm trying to grab your attention
But just let me say how much care about you, baby thats my true intention
This the type of gift that wasn't bought, but it's the thought that counts
Ha, get it? Sweet and silly, you know thats what I'm about

I met you at a church retreat and I gazed upon a truly beautiful girl
But I must admit, I was stunned and you made my heart twirl
You probably already know, but I just wanted to get at you
Doin' whatever it takes, I was just tryna make you my boo

But I should admit why I wanted to be your boyfriend
Seeing you, my feelings would transcend
Into another dimension, unspeakable feelings
For some reason, I only wanted your sexual healing

But its just a feeling, it was so uncontrolled
But its the qualities you hold that I want to unfold,
Smart, sweet, and funny, and did I forget to mention adorable
And there isn't a day that you'll ever look so horrible

You used to call me up, 3AM, you couldn't sleep late at night
Or you had problems, still, talking to you, felt so right
And when you were hurt, your heart is what I wanted to mend
We used to vent all the time, but I guess that came to an end

I just want us to be able to console and vent
To each other once more, & know that I give you my consent
To say and do whatever to me, so that you can ultimately prevent
What you don't want or when I'm out of line, I don't care if it ends in torment

And there's just something about your eyes
Everytime I look at 'em, I become mesmerized
Your beauty is astounding, your face is something I will never forget
And I'd hate to see it sad and upset or filled with regret

Anyone would be lucky to be with you, baby you're a keeper
No one would ever be able to ruin your beauty, not even the grim reaper
But enough about you and your looks, let's go on a different subject
Oh, here's a little secret, I'll fuck up any nigga that shows you disrespect

I just don't wanna lose you, you're someone dear to me
And you know that I'll always be real with you, that I can gaurentee
So do you and be free, and be as much as you can be
And if you get sick, don't trip, I'll be your Vitamin C

Did I ever tell you how much I care for you
& did I ever tell you that when I saw you me heart wasn't just passing through
Cause see, I believe God gave me a chance to pursue
Pursue you, and bring you happiness like no one can do

And it's been awhile since we've seen each other or even hung out
Filled with doubt that we'll kick it again, I'm trying not to pout
Cause I'm getting too emotional, I feel like I wanna drift away
And I'm not bring you down, afterall today is your birthday

It feels like it'll be forever until we kick it again
I'm doing my best to restrain my inner pain
See I know your busy with life, and you hardly ever have the time
Cause I know you're living in the moment, that feeling is sublime

Motionless and emotional is what I've become without you
I'm just being honest with you if you didn't have a clue
I know it sounds like we had break up, but it's you who I honestly miss
And I honestly belive that you're the only one that can make me feel like this

If you can't sleep at night, just lay down and close your eyes
The feeling will be right, you'll be able to dream and fantasize
If you ever need someone to hold at night, I'll be your teddy bear
No wait, scratch that, I'm your one and only "Eddy Bear"

This is my gift to you, so embrace it if you choose to
Just promise me you'll always do you
And I ain't trying to be sappy, but
Live like you'll never live, and just be Happy.

Happy Birthday Aliah<3

Incomplete Part 2 (Original Poetry)

Incomplete Part 2 - Edward Daos (07/19/10)
*Inspired by RRSTV


Late nights, daily thoughts, and inconsistent talking
You keep my heart and my soul running, never walking
Cause see all my life, I've been searching for a soul like yours
The type of girl that makes my spirit and feelings soar

But first things first, let me tell you something
Seeing your beauty is more precious than a ring
And your smile is like the sunrise, the most spectacular thing ever in sight
And your love is something I would fight for, all day and all night

I could never get it right, but then you came along
It felt like right next to you, is where I belong
You make me feel so sprung and so crazy, I am in a disarray
You bring life to me, yet you take my breath away

You don't gotta cry no more cause I will fight for our love
Your halo glows brighter than the sun, you are an angel from up above
Babe, if you get depressed, just come to me and I'll make you feel blessed
Just tell me when to stop, I don't wanna sound obsessed

You get me high off of love when I gaze into your eyes
I'm telling you the truth, just blaze out these lies
If love was like a 'Gallery' you'd be a masterpiece
We should cease the tension between us, make it deceased

Sippin too much alcohol, getting closer to becoming Love Drunk
And I know I'm not the handsomest nigga, or even a hunk
But I can make you feel so special, like you're the queen of the world
You just gotta agree to be my one and only girl

And Fuck being friends, I got a million already
I just wanna be able to call you mine, my lover, and my lady
And if you are to be mine, I will forever hold you in my arms
And I'll promise you the world and keep you from harm

You already know the wish that I make on shooting stars
I just wanna steal you away and put you in my 'Getaway Car'
And you could be my Bonnie to my Clyde, you the only girl I feel for inside
I will tell you everything, I have nothing to hide

And I can spend forever with you, grasping onto our memories
I can see us now, kissing in the rain and making love in the summer breeze
I feed on the love that you give me, I've become so addicted
Am I the only that depicted us together? I've become so afflicted

My House of Love is open, and you're the only one welcome inside
But I must warn you, you might end up as my bride
And I bet, when you smile it makes anyones day
See, I wasn't joking when I said you take my breath away




Even though you're out of my league, I see my future in you
And you don't got a clue, that without you, I feel so blue
Quit breakin my heart, don't put your feelings in a disguise
Don't decieve me, just please me to happiness pretty brown eyes

It's so unbelievable for me be feeling like this
Here it goes again, I'm falling into your love abyss
This is somewhere I thought I'd never be again
I am so Love Drunk, take away this coke and Henn.

These feelings that I have for you are very controversial
I want you to become part of me, my inner circle
And it's because of you that I got the brown eyed blues
I could put you on my pedestal, you are my muse

This is the way how I feel about you, how I feel inside
I just want both of our hearts to blindly collide
Into each other, and you are just too fucking divine
You are too beautiful to be called a dime, I just wanna make you mine

See my love for you is more solid than concrete
And this relationship is so special I don't ever want a repeat
Sometimes you make me feel so defeated, you've depleted my heart, this is so bittersweet
All I'm saying is that without you, my life is Incomplete